Sunday, September 26, 2010

One of the portfolios we looked at for class was by Jason Ceynar from Bonnie Sunstein's The Portfolio Standard (Heinemann, Portsmouth, NH: 2000). He wrote about always writing to impress a teacher or to sounds scholarly.

He wrote:
I can't even remember what the paper is about.

I didn't want to reread it because I was afraid
that I'd discover I was given the A unjustly.

This paper represents my tendency to value the
grade I get on a paper mroe than the content of

the paper and the learning that I achieve through
the process of writing it (227).


Wow, I totally understand what he is talking about! I think we have all started papers with a mindset of finishing, doing little revisions, and submitting asap. I know I have "held my breath" before submitting papers with last minute doubts as to its quality or purpose. But, I know that I have done this with nonacademic writing before, too.

I have kept a journal for years, ever since my first diary back in 3rd grade. Looking back at my journal entries, even from a year ago, can be surprising. Even though I don't share my journals with others, I sometimes think I sound like I'm trying to impress someone. Who would this unknown audience be? Am I concerned about writing my true feelings down because someone might find it and read it (like when I was younger and felt a need to lock my diary)? I guess age and time has made me more aware of how powerful writing can be. I can remember certain experiences better after reading journal entries--the words have meaning behind them that help me remember. Not everything I have written is gradeable, but different formats have definitely had their reasons for being important. I will continue to write, not only for scholarly purposes, but also for me so I can continue to remember where I came from.

5 comments:

  1. I love your reasoning for journaling all of these years. It's one of the best ways to really write for just yourself, no one else, and you really learn a lot about yourself in process. And as an added bonus, you have easy access to your memories. Happy journaling!

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  2. I am always in awe of people who journal, and journal consistently. I feel like it is a huge gift to give yourself- a timeline of your emotions. I always wished I had the motivation to do it-- but it would be like homework to me.

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  3. I envy people who are able to keep a journal for longer than a week at a time. I always find myself getting side-tracked and not returning to a blank page until months later. After reading this, though, I went and looked at my own journal and realized I, too, write to try to impress some unknown audience. I never noticed it before, but now I'm intrigued as to who I thought I was writing to.

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  4. I completely understand throwing writing together. Honestly, sometimes I feel like I haven't been able to really invest in my writing for classes in awhile. There is a sense of acomplishment when you turn in a paper knowing that you put everything you could into it. I want to get back in the habit of that kind of writing. I think writing, in general, can do that: it allows us to slow down. That's definitely what a journal does, even if we are writing for an unknown audience.

    I enjoyed your post :)

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  5. I think in my case, there was always a sense of self importance in my journaling. I could never feel like I was only journaling for myself (maybe that's part of the reason I never kept one going for long). When I would journal, it was in an effort to get thoughts out of my head so I could get a sense of them in the palm of my hand, but also to leave some sort of record, as if part of my thought I would unquestionably become famous some day and my childhood thoughts would become academic fodder.

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